Royal Blue Dreamer

D id you know that married men and women are more likely to live longer than those who remain single? Well, many researchers have found studies that suggest that married couples are able to enjoy a healthier and happier lifestyle than those individuals who to live the single-life   (Stanton, 2018) . Marriage has more positive influences on one's physical, mental, and social stability than an individual who is not married.    Sources Referenced :   Stanton, Glenn. “The Health Benefits of Marriage.”  Focus on the Family , 1 Sept. 2012, www.focusonthefamily.com/about/focus-findings/marriage/health-benefits-of-marriage.

Above is the title of my PowerPoint presentation. However, below is a peer review of others in compare/contrast. Day 1:  Endangered Species > What Works : This particular presentation about endangered species around the world, and how the human race has a major impact on the declining of some animals does a great job providing definition, facts, and and statistical data as supporting evidence of her key points > What Does Not Work : Although the writer uses several statistics as evidence for her topic, there seems to be an over exposure to statistics rather than focusing on each individual point. > Improvement  Needed : The writer needs to focus on ways to clarify her claim/thesis statement. Day 2 : Rap is Controversial > What Works : In this presentation, the writer implements a unique sense of style and maintains organization of the three key-focus points of the topic. > What Does Not Work : Thesis statement that the writer uses does not explicitly